Wednesday, 9 December 2015

Slice of Life 1

I try not to wince as the buckets try to fit into the next divet. After a few minutes the buckles are the tightest they can be. I stand, attempting to gain my balance, and lean forward. My toes that had been previously cheated, slide away for the end of the book. After aAfter a while my feet began to ache, barely having enough time to get them off, I free my feet. Almost seconds later another pair of boots arrive at my feet ready for me to try them on.
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12 comments:

  1. Kenneth Moses9 December 2015 at 13:55

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  2. Kenneth Moses9 December 2015 at 13:55

    Blog format

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  3. Academy189 December 2015 at 13:57

    the format is actually pretty cool, also good SOL

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  4. Unknown9 December 2015 at 15:43

    Yeah, ski boots are a pain. I like how you managed to tell so much with so few words.

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  5. NoahTheBlogger10 December 2015 at 08:24

    I hate ski boots too. I like your description.

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  6. apool10 December 2015 at 08:24

    Ski boots are again to take on and off but skiing is still fun!

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  7. apool10 December 2015 at 08:25

    Ski boots are again to take on and off but skiing is still fun!

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  8. Kenneth Moses10 December 2015 at 08:32

    I really like you put the wood in the background

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  9. Unknown10 December 2015 at 08:59

    Great description of an annoying process-getting boots to can be such a struggle.

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  10. Maxsclassreads10 December 2015 at 11:24

    The descriptive words like "wince" "another divet" "free my feet" bring clear images and feeling the reader. Anyone who has tried on ski boots can definitely relate!

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  11. Sofie R10 December 2015 at 14:50

    I totally understand how you feel with ski boots, they can be so hard. nice sol

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  12. Remallen2311 December 2015 at 08:19

    great description. i know how you feel

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